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Today I read an article about Diabetes Mellitus (DM).

Do you know that there are two types of DM?

The second sentence is already correct.

If I talk about the mechanism, my diary will be too long so I won't dwell too much on the details.

Simply put, if you get DM, your body will not be able to able to convert glycogen to glucose due to lack of insulin. Thus, the body's blood glucose level will decrease.

The article In read is about the treatment of Type II Diabetes Mellitus.

The first line treatment for Type- 2 DM is to lose weight.

There are several ways of losing weight. Some examples are diet restriction and increasing calorie expenditure through exercise.

Among them, the most eefective but radical way is cutting the stomach to lessen the bowel output.

After the procedure, you will be able to reduce your food intake since the capacity of the stomach to store food is lessened. Simply put, you will feel full even though you have eaten less than usual.

Recently, new findings suggest that the metabolic system of the patients who underwent the procedure also changed.

They are able to control their blood sugar quickly even before they lose weight.

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